E3/4 Response 1
The response is fluent and analytical but it does not address the terms of the question. There is a clear line of argument which has interpreted the question as 'the disparity between generations' rather than the 'enduring relevance' of the question. It is well structured and has a range of interesting and valuable insights into Navigating the Global as a theme. The range of theoretical perspectives discussed indicates higher-order thought processes and a very thorough understanding of the texts.