E3/4 Response 3
The response develops a central argument in the introduction that addresses the key issue in the question. Romanticism as a way of thinking is approached in terms of the transcendent, aesthetic and healing powers of the natural world and this approach is maintained throughout the response. The textual analysis is competent, with some good insights into Keats' poetry. The language of the response is well controlled, although the structure isolates the analysis of each individual text. There is a need to more effectively integrate and synthesise the various strands of the response.