Band 4/5 Response 2
The response to part (a) provides a structured answer and includes adequate historical detail. It outlines a selection of features but the response would be strengthened by using a more formal tone and including more specific detail in terms of Speer's role in the Nazi regime. The response to part (b) describes an interpretation of Speer's role in history and would have benefited from a focus on judgement and critical analysis. The information presented is adequate and largely accurate but it would be more effectively presented by the use of a more formal style and the inclusion of more detailed information.
